Developmental & Line Editing for Authors of Urban Fantasy, Scifi, and Dark Romance
Creating a road map to strengthen your plot and character arcs, themes, and the major beats of your story.
Story beats identified to improve emotional payoff of highs and lows
Outlined individual character arcs to ensure adequate page time for each
Checking that plot events flow naturally with clear cause-and-effect
Highlighted story/character themes, and whether they feed a cohesive narrative
Guidance on enhancing existing themes or changing the story to fit a desired theme
Feedback and guidance on writing strengths and weaknesses (etc. dialogue) and how to improve
Multiple one-on-one sessions to strategize how to fix these issues in your next draft
Developmental editing is most helpful in the early stages of your book's development. It'll help you figure out which parts of the story are strengthening the overall narrative and which parts are weighing it down.
After a developmental edit, you'll have a better idea of which romantic scenes are coming too early or too late; how to add your fantasy world politics into the narrative to decrease info-dumping; when to increase or decrease page time for side characters; and whether a big reveal near the end could have added more tension earlier in the story.
Developmental editing will add clarity to your world-building, characters, plot progression, themes, and the overall story you're trying to tell.
** Projects over $100 require a 50% down payment.
$0.01/word - Up to 5,000 words
$0.015/word - 5,001 - 40,000 words
$0.02/word - 40,001 - 100,000
$0.025/word - Over 100,000 words
Strengthening your storytelling voice line-by-line for clarity and genre-appropriate words and flow.
Sentences fixed to communicate information clearly
Changes/suggestions of vocabulary to fit the tone, genre, or mood
Re-structuring of paragraphs for flow/clarity of information or enhancing tone/emotional impact
Help with dialogue (to make characters sound natural and distinct)
Fixes on over-repeated words and phrases
Occasional minor changes to spelling, grammar, and punctuation
Line editing is most helpful after you've written your final draft and are confident that this is the version of the story you want to polish for pitching, submitting, or publishing.
After a line edit, you'll have a story where the paragraphs and sentences flow together naturally. Words and phrases will match the vibes of each scene and the book's genre. Overly wordy sentences will be trimmed down or re-ordered for clarity and a comfortable reader experience.
Line editing hones the voice of the story, not only ensuring your reader feels the emotions in each scene but can also understand what's actually happening.
** Projects over $100 require a 50% down payment.
$0.008/word - Up to 10,000 words
$0.009/word - 10,001 - 100,000 words
$0.01/word - Over 100,000 words
Contact me for a free sample edit (1,000 words) to see if I'm the right editor for you.
Video, audio, or email consultation to discuss your book, questions, concerns, and expectations.
We'll also discuss deadlines, progress reports, and how we'll keep in touch.
I always include an editing contract to protect your intellectual rights to your project.
This includes a zero-AI guarantee.
While I'm working on your project, we'll have regular check-ins.
You can ask questions, express concerns, or let me know about any changes to your own schedule or timeline.
In addition to your edited manuscript, I'll also send you a reference sheet for proper names in the story, and a 2-page summary of thoughts, feedback, and advice.
We'll follow up within 2 weeks to discuss any questions or concerns you have about the manuscript edits, my feedback, and the process overall.
If you're not satisfied, we'll discuss a timeline for revisions.
If we decide during the follow-up consultation that revisions are necessary, I'll set an additional deadline to review the manuscript and make additional changes.
A short feedback survey helps me improve my services, as well as provide testimonials for future clients.